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|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|Wow, that is intense, that really grabs you, great one.|
|Reviewed by Stephanie Storey-Morant
|Thanks for sharing this piece. I know all too well where you've been. I also know how it feels to swim away from the depression and to dance on land.
Keep your head up and keep on writing.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Oooh, you've penned this one well...this is a sad state of depression, but thank goodness God wasn't ready for your life to end. I know a few who didn't get this opportunity and thought thought that death would end their suffering this is the saddest of all.
|Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
|Reviewed by J M
|This one is inspiratiopnal in reminding many that could relate of depression, addiction all whcih are dark and powerful to the mind. Eats away untill your lost. Thank you for sharing this powerful poem of reality. So glad your in light once more.