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Simply-fire
by Axilea MU

Sunday, July 28, 2013
Rated "G" by the Author.
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oh, the unbearable lightness of homophones!


The fireplace looks scary in summer
his eyes are bleeding plums
in the space of memory;
but today we try anew
the body's unforgotten dance -
blindfolded step by step
hoping to get away
from the fire.

In the dance,
something simplified astounds me...

Idealized azure
above our heads
when we come out to breathe
free and bare, while in the breeze
the crazed flight of azuré butterflies -
we couldn't care less.

 

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 3/18/2014
Beautiful imagery. Love it. Liz
Reviewed by Charlie 3/8/2014
Hey! I missed this one. The last line throws me off each time I read this. It seems so carelessly placed there. I got gloriously lost in all of those z's and soft rhymes and plays on words, that it caught me off guard. But then, that line is right on the money. We get so caught up in our own ideas of beauty, that we can't see the even larger miracles around us.

And I need to send you a little thing my D wrote along the same vein that I think you'll like.

So nice to read your poetry again. --charlie
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 12/6/2013
surprising and unexpected use of words - that is poetry!
Reviewed by Andy Turner 8/24/2013
...it is amazing how the inanimate can be viewed as animated when seen through the imaginative eye. love this.
Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/13/2013
Ah, love! Axilea you describe it so divinely, as it should be. May love and peace be always with you my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by D. Vegas 8/12/2013
Axilea, The art of love, forgetting what it felt like, and the exhilaration of the dance?? You are such a wordsmith!

Always,

Deborah
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 8/2/2013
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 7/31/2013
wondeful imagery and words to lead us there
budd
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/29/2013
All I can gather is that this is about, “coming out.” Blue on blue can't be seen, so it becomes the perfect disguise that can be ignored because it isn't, “seen.”

Ron
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 7/28/2013
It's intriguing when people decorate there fireplaces with things that do not belong inside fireplaces, some psychologist probably has a theory on that but, to be free is wonderfully transforming
Reviewed by George Carroll 7/28/2013
In the Spring time in the fields much is hidden that even butterflies would not dare to venture nor anyone else, you would hope, that would interrupt love.



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