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broken trust

Thursday, March 22, 2007
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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sometimes our loved ones say and do such harsh things towards us that we would never have expected fom them and this leads to broken trust



i was just a little angry,

i was just a little upset,

i was just a little fedup.


i was just expecting a

sorry from you,

i was just expecting a

kiss from you,

i was just expecting a

hug from u.


then every thing

would have mended;




your inflated ego,

it broke down all

my expectations,


i was sitting there,

shocked and shattered

wondering, r u the same person,

who claims to love me so much .


i was sitting there,

tearful and grieved

wondering, how can u say

such things for me.


u said and said and said,

harsh words,

pathetic words,

words like dagger to my heart.


i was hurt,

my heart broken into pieces,

my trust all shaken,

all broken.


And ,

u went away,

leaving me

 sobbing and sighing,


i cried and cried and cried,

i wept for the whole night.


morning came,

and i realized it's all over now,

you are with that beautiful girl.

and i ,

i am on my death bed




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Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi 1/26/2009
Very beautiful and strong. A matter of every-day-life and, yet, the death of a heart, hence far from triviality. The true catastrophes often happen unseen.
Reviewed by Art Sun 3/27/2007
Your thoughts express emotions of pain and sadness, it is a hurt that many can and will relate to as so many have crossed the same path....a broken relationship can literally place one within the death bed of life....

nice work.....Art Sun...
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/22/2007
This is so sad. Clearly, you express your emotions most powerfully in your verses here, Nida. Love, peace, and healing to you,


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