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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
11/30/2009 |
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| I liked the delicate, ethereal feel of this, as if it was dropped on the page like stardust. Nice work. |
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| Reviewed by Debra Bateman |
11/29/2009 |
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| Beautiful! : ) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
11/28/2009 |
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| ...such peace is this gem that shines like a star! |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
11/28/2009 |
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| Beautiful, LaBelle. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
11/28/2009 |
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Beautiful write, Belle; well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
11/27/2009 |
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| I miss starry nights. LA has only the electric green haze of night with a speck or two of starlight. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/27/2009 |
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LaBelle,
This is prayer - tender, thoughtful prayer.
John
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/27/2009 |
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Your compelling verses draw the reader in, Belle; truly a lovely offering. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/27/2009 |
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Very nicely done and I enjoyed the alternate rhyming scheme...there is something spiritually uplifting about a star filled sky when in the country especially.
fee |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
11/27/2009 |
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"The primeordial lamps of God" wonderfully expressive Belle, that's how I look at them, but the phrase is beautiful.
Hugs! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
11/27/2009 |
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an excellent peace LaBelle
love those twinkling stars
Love & Peace be with you
Happy Thanksgiving
William
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| Reviewed by Anthony Nerone |
11/27/2009 |
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Another piece of lovely poetry, LaBelle. Thank You for the reading.
GOD BLESS
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
11/27/2009 |
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A lovely poem to be read as sparkles from the log in the fireplace gives smoking nods of approval.
Georg
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
11/27/2009 |
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| Love it. So simple, sweet and profound in thanks giving. J'nia |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
11/27/2009 |
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We should never go long without star light.
Thanks for sharing this enchanting poetry.
John |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
11/27/2009 |
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| To gaze at the stars and allow their illusion to enter your psyche is tantamount to beholding the Master Creator . . . jpb |
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| Reviewed by R. Arrington |
11/27/2009 |
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| A very inspirational poem, I love the ending. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/27/2009 |
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the primordial lamps of god
Stars are wondrous, and this is a lovely poem, La Belle. |
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