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Lose the Darn Directions
by LadyJtalks for LadyJzTalkZone
Saturday, October 31, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
What can I say... |
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Tonights the night the veil is thin
So we may enter the castle within
Where there to dwell is all our kind
With acts of guelling we shall find
All the years for this day we wait
Time is near I can't be late
He is not saying what I think is "Dear"
For my ears disceive me what I fear
The hired help who will drive my coach
Has now admitted as his neck I chocke
Paper I had wrote carefully in blood
Fell out of his pockets and into the mud
He's screaming "don't you worry" my Queen
I'm in luck for as my best buddy's a fiene
A stop by his place and we're well on the way
Permission to live, love, now what do you say
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/5/2009 |
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A most apt and timely write for Halloween. Nicely done! Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
11/1/2009 |
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| I say some darn good entertaining Halloweenish verse, cheers |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/1/2009 |
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Love the coach ,Queen, gives a classic feel and the humor
is well done! Enjoyed!... ET |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/1/2009 |
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Love it Jackie...well done.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
11/1/2009 |
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Man will no stop to ask direction from another man...or from any woman God help him!!! LOL
Georg
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/31/2009 |
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Cute one, Lady J; well done! Love the graphic!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
10/31/2009 |
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Didn't have a GPS.
Arrrrrr.
~W~ |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/31/2009 |
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I agree, lose the darn directions, nice to hear from you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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