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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your verses allow me to reflect upon all that you have shared; you express a universal and timeless theme. Thank you, Mendy. Love and blessings to you,
|Reviewed by Asa Seeley
|it will be...for only 'one' knows that day and hour and He's not telling. thanks
|Reviewed by jude forese
|lovely set of circumstances ...|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Sounds like the life to me, enhanced by childhood dreams. Now all you have to do is live it. Very inspiring.
|Reviewed by David Thompson
What a lovely, lovely poem you have composed. And in it you have, seemingly, included all the important things we encounter through our daily walk. It seems that once a person has read this piece, they, themselves, would be inspired to be a better person--one who would take time to "smell the roses," strive to be the kind of individual who would be more sensitive to others' needs, and desire to be with God once life on earth has come to an end. In think, Mendy, this is a gentle piece, as if you are whispering all your inner thoughts into a gentle breeze for all to enjoy. I want to be the kind of person you have described. And finally, may your wish for "The Ultimate Surprise" be granted whenever that day arrives.