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The Window's Pane
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, December 02, 2009
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Took this picture yesterday afternoon during the rain. And this morning, it's snowing!! =]

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


i like to think of rain as tears falling
from the Heavens --- it understands
my pane.  not as strong as i appear,
having to hold the outside out and

the inside in where each belongs ---
the humans ask too much.  so when
it rains, it soothes my aching arms
and takes the sun out of my eyes, if

only for a little while.  it leaves a bit
of itself behind for me to read until
the silly humans decide they need
to see and clean me against my will

--- but not today.  too cold and wet.
there's something to be said for the
rain.  or is that snow?  a bit of both
kissing my fragile face with love ....

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (12/2)

link to this morning's snow - www.youtube.com/watch?v=gsgcYITo7YY
 




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Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 12/2/2009
Excellent Karla. Patrick
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 12/2/2009
Karen that picture and poem are both amazing, I encourage you to submit this one, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle 12/2/2009
Beautifuly written Karla. Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy
Reviewed by John Flanagan 12/2/2009
Karla,
You're turning out wonderful work.

John
Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu 12/2/2009
Written from an unusual perspective. I was surprised to find sadness and love expressed in this context! Interesting.

Axilea
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 12/2/2009
wow Karla, I could feel every drop of emotion,,this is simply beautiful and goes into my library
Love
Christine
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 12/2/2009
Karla, your writing somehow is getting better everyday.
Rain becomes you. -gene.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser 12/2/2009
One of your best Karla. This is what poetry is all about. You tie it all together perfectly.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 12/2/2009
i love the softness of this-very sweet and fantastic photo!
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/2/2009
Very well done Karla, this is one excellant write and should be sumitted to mags.
fee
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 12/2/2009
Love the poem of the pain of a pane. The video even caused a chill and I'm here in Florida. The closest we get to winter, so far, is 69 degrees high for one day.
Dig in and get some hot chocolate to keep warm.
Blessings and love,
Susan
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone 12/2/2009
yes, they say it will flurry here by weeks end. going to see your video now. LadyJ
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 12/2/2009
Gotta love the pane for expressing her point of view and I'm sure the sill is waiting to have her say.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 12/2/2009
Wonderful, Karla ~
Reviewed by Paul D Berube 12/2/2009
Beautiful, Karla. God bless.
Reviewed by John Bidwell 12/2/2009
This is really beautiful!
Wow- take a bow.

John
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/2/2009
"...A bit of both/kissing my fragile face with love ..."

Beautiful write and piccy, Karla; well done! And loved your video, too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by William Bonilla 12/2/2009
Its just like you wrote, here today
woke up with rain
pelting at my window pane
unmercifully leaving streaks
of rain tears,
as I try to follow one
a thousand more come
a never ending scene
all day rain has been forecast
so I'll stay indoor read and review a while......
enjoyed your write Karla
Love & peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 12/2/2009
Windows pane's words, telling us that we shouldn't look through all the time and see the messages written there only for us.

Georg

Reviewed by neerja gandhi 12/2/2009
beautiful....absolute beauty in words. Best wishes Karla. Neerja
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