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|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Magic flowers, charms of flowers of these roads
That are built by the independence of the feeling
of Self, powders to generate. (IT COULD BE ALSO, "PUT TO GENERATE")
Endless space without time.
This way to surrender to a new independence and its own philosophy.
Translation provided by P&L Power Translator, and a little polishing by me.
I LIKE THE GENERAL IDEA OF THIS WRITING, but the poetic composition seems to require a revision.
Keep posting, Poet.
Healthy long creative life.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU