by Taylor M Lindsay
Friday, March 26, 2010
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this is a poem I wrote that made it in a poetry book of students all over the counrty.
Tears are in my eyes,
As I remember the day we said our good-byes,
I do regret,
Giving in to my own sins.
Two different people,
Two different lives,
I can’t understand why I didn’t hide,
The smell of you on my coat still lingers,
I wish I had the rose that you gave me,
But when you left,
I cried over it,
And when I started to leave you behind,
I slid it over the flowers,
I kissed the rose,
And before I walked away,
I left it on your grave…
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|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Very well written, Taylor|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Soul-stirring in emotive and meaningful power, Taylor. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|OH so touching. This is beautifuly.|
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|Amazing! Excellent! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU, TAYLOR!
Indeed, this is quite powerful, and eerily eloquent.
Is it about.. Sifah?
It is no surprise it was published, sweetie! You are truly deserving - CONGRATULATIONS! I'm thrilled for you..
You are on your way to becoming a famous poetess, methinks :)
God bless you, Taylor.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Losing a loved one is brought out vividly in this poignant poem that tugs at your heart strings at its conclusion.