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Giving In
by Taylor M Lindsay

Friday, March 26, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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this is a poem I wrote that made it in a poetry book of students all over the counrty.

 

Giving In

Tears are in my eyes,
As I remember the day we said our good-byes,
Different inside,
I do regret,
Giving in to my own sins.
Two different people,
Two different lives,
I can’t understand why I didn’t hide,
The smell of you on my coat still lingers,
I wish I had the rose that you gave me,
But when you left,
I cried over it,
And when I started to leave you behind,
I slid it over the flowers,
I kissed the rose,
And before I walked away,
I left it on your grave…

 

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Reviewed by Paul Judges 3/30/2010
Very well written, Taylor
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/26/2010
Soul-stirring in emotive and meaningful power, Taylor. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by The Poetess 3/26/2010
OH so touching. This is beautifuly.
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia 3/26/2010
Amazing! Excellent! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU, TAYLOR!

Indeed, this is quite powerful, and eerily eloquent.
Is it about.. Sifah?

It is no surprise it was published, sweetie! You are truly deserving - CONGRATULATIONS! I'm thrilled for you..
You are on your way to becoming a famous poetess, methinks :)

God bless you, Taylor.
Love&Hugs, Rhonda
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/26/2010
Losing a loved one is brought out vividly in this poignant poem that tugs at your heart strings at its conclusion.

George



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