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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
5/20/2013 |
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"To err is human, to really foul things
up requires a computer" of sorts..
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
5/20/2013 |
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~Dan~
Hope that's steady and constant.
Enjoyed~~
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/19/2013 |
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And where would we be without hope; I've been close to that of late... ...and it's not pretty. Thank you, Dan. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by E. Phillips |
5/19/2013 |
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| If she missed three stops, then you did too (most likely). Stalker!:) |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
5/19/2013 |
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| a she or he sits across from all of us don't they? your 3 sentences conveyed the whole sadness of what we've become in the most perfect way...thanks dan for the reminder to fight the entrapment...pat |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
5/19/2013 |
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D.L,
Excellent perception of today's world. Teens especially can't seem to live withour their cellphone's. In MY day their were no cellphones to speak of, just the landline phone's. My daughter's phone travels with her where ever she goes, and so does HER daughter's. Progress? I'm not so sure.
Love and blessings,
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
5/19/2013 |
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That is intently watching!
But either way you painted this picture
of waiting nicely...
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/19/2013 |
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| So very sad, and I see dozens like her every day who cannot live without those devices. |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
5/18/2013 |
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Giving hope to the hopeless
She too sits across from me.
Enjoyed.
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| Reviewed by Isabella Koldras |
5/18/2013 |
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The "constant hope"....and yearnings...what keeps us alive.
Great short story D. L.
With warm regards Isabella. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/18/2013 |
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Yes, absorbed in a world of their own, the text people are in constant communication and constantly hoping for a way out.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
5/18/2013 |
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Hope is the water that quenches our thirst I think.. no matter what we are hoping for... a text, a call, or just a thought to drift upon us, a memory that waits for us to acknowledge it. Yes we may miss a few stops a long the way but what does that really matter...there will be other stops... I love this piece! Thank you for sharing it, TD..)
hugs and love
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/18/2013 |
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Technology moves on, and yearning will always happen.
G |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
5/18/2013 |
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| I see that daily . . . I don't text . . . I don't answer texts . . I use the phone as a phone . . . Out of touch with the modern world? . . . most definitely! . . . Darn good writing . . . |
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