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Noodle
by Eden Lane
Saturday, April 14, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
a poem for my daughter |
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you are my little noodle
my little noodle girl
do you know how much I love you
more than anything in the world
if I stretch my arms out wide
to make a long straight line
it would reach on to infinity
from your heart to mine
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
4/23/2007 |
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Always nice to read poems showing love for one's children....nice work on this poem...
enjoyed.....Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/22/2007 |
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Loving verses from a loving mom; a sweet write, Eden. Thank you for sharing it. Welcome to AD. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/14/2007 |
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So very cute, so innocently done. Enjoyed.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine |
4/14/2007 |
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| Sweet message -- R |
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| Reviewed by Samuel Stone |
4/14/2007 |
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A very nice, but simple little poem, I enjoyed the read...wishing you well...
Sam |
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