|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Kathleen I quite enjoyed reading "Elusive Thread"
A touching write indeed.
All the best,
|Reviewed by randy smith
|Peace is indeed elusive. and mankind as a whole will never find it in the flesh! but it can be had in the sprit.nice write. randy c smith|
|Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
|Yes, we have to always strive for peace and hope that one day we will begin again for the last time. I see the images of the starting over again and again in "begun in the dark-bound ice of midwinters turning", and "the tatters of broken darkness. When the sparking flame ... returns." I see these lines offering hope that maybe peace will arrive if "we" do not give up striving for it.|
|Reviewed by Ken Chartrand
|Hi Kathleen, I read your poem, "Elusive Thread". I found it mysterious and thought provoking. Yes Peace must be something we must strive to achieve so as it contains a win win situation for all parties. Great work. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den".|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Kathleen, I underscore all that has been said by your other admirers.
Beautifully said, highly professional. Gene.
|Reviewed by Dawn Mullan
|Wonderfully written piece, the metaphor is brilliant. Thank you, DL Mullan|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|A deep touching poem..........M|
|Reviewed by Charles O'Connor III
|Your poem was very thought grabbing to me. I sensed a creepily delicious flow in your poem and as a writer in a style of lovecraft, I enjoyed this very much. Good wording, good work.
|Reviewed by Masood Lohar
|"...ideals that quickly rust in rain
like shattered swords."....
Huh.. what a metaphor! Peace has woven our civilizations. If peace is dead, civilization is just a shroud.
A great work Kath
|Reviewed by Manes Pierre, Ph.D.
|Elusive Thread is truly captivating. Peace is indeed an elusive thread. Keep writing!
|Reviewed by George Jackson
|Peace really is an elusive thread. Once I find my end of it, i'll let ya know. Beautifull writing here. Thank you,
|Reviewed by Chuckie Finn
|Fascinating effort Kathleeen. My sincere compliments.
|Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
|very nicely done!...wonderful imagery and capturing depth.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
|"Elusive thread called peace." Excellent, well written, very much to the point that love, happiness and peace are found within us: never without. Visit me sometime, Kathleen.
Love in Christ~~
|Reviewed by Marco Landi
|I enjoy reading this elusive Thread|
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|Have you had this published? It seems to be fantasy poetry. I suspect I know somewho who would like to publish it. He also takes
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|..this is exquisite in its wondrous beauty..I sure am looking forward to your next piece..ty
|Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
|I've added this one to my library...great write, kindred Celtic soul!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|WELCOME TO THE DEN!
What a wonderful well penned piece, am looking forward to reading more!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Wonderfully written, colorful and descriptive..I enjoyed it's fullness. ~SH~|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Very good. The answer is doing away with the need for war.|