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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
11/29/2009 |
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| Great poem Dale.Excellent work.take care |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
11/28/2009 |
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| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/28/2009 |
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| I think we are all just lingering, so we best cherish all the good moments. |
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| Reviewed by Steve Chering |
11/27/2009 |
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As soon as I spotted 'Labour' spelled wrong I just knew you were from US.
But the content of the whole poem is outstanding!
Well done that outstanding poet!
Steve Chering.England. The Mother country |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
11/27/2009 |
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| Excellent poetry. Packed with truth. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/27/2009 |
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wandering
upon this field of woes
reenacting events of the past
dust clouds over plowed ground
sowing seeds of doubt
in this journey of the farm
emotionally compromised
I very much appreciate this meaningful metaphorical offering, Dale. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/27/2009 |
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I believe we have to take our happiness where we find it, whether it be in small doses in between periods of crisis or a slow steady diet, or perhaps a glut of happiness followed by a drought...all part of life.
fee |
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