I Told God
by S. Joan Popek
Wednesday, August 27, 2003
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I Told God
By S. Joan Popek
I told God to remove my burdens,
But, I was too busy shouldering to notice.
I told God to take my pain away,
But, I was too busy hurting to notice.
I told God to make my life easier,
But, I was too busy working to notice.
I told God that if he wasn't going to listen,
to just leave me alone,
But, this time, I noticed.
S. Joan Popek
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|Reviewed by Phyllis Banks
|You keep on doing it! Wish we were still near so I could take lessons! Hugs Eileen|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Excellant lovely piece of wisdom and inspiration S. Joan Popek!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
this one reached out and slapped me with the truth
i needed to read this one today...i am thankful you posted this one! i'd like to add this to my library--so profound!
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|excellent write, joan! god is so good, isn't he?? (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D|