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•  Dying Lessons
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When you said,
“The world don’t need you.”
I laughed.
But when I try to think of things to say,
my thoughts tear the guts out of words
and only empty shells fall from my lips
as I try to escape the broad expanse of precision.
I’m dying...I’m Dying...I’M DYING...
I’m dying...to live.


I’ve said goodbye to you countless times
and still, I’m haunted by your image...your essence.
The taste and the smell of you
leave me breathless in the dark.


But you said,
“Don’t scream out in the darkness...no one hears”
or was it, “no one cares.”
The room you think so big at night,
shrinks to almost nothing in the day.
And your fear of death is just the fear of dying
which is just a fear of pain.


Then you said,
“If you think you know,
you don’t.
If you think you will,
you won’t.
If you think that sex is love,
Your sex is loveless.”


So you say...
but...
...the world don’t need you.

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Reviewed by malcolm barber
this is a good poem
Reviewed by 000 000
A great use of words, This one makes us think more of the words we choose to say to someone else. Each person hears..and concludes the same words spoken in many different ways.
CarolHawks
Reviewed by Cles Wilson
WOW...Very powerful!
Reviewed by sarah playle
I love your writing.
Reviewed by melbalyn baang (Reader)
well,i read your poem tittled dying leesons.you are correct.all of do everything to live in this complicated world.thats life,after all we die.always remember our life is only borrowed from God.God bless you...
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Damn....love/hate
hate/love
which ever you give pain a good look!!!
Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Very good, Michael: great imagery, painful words yet true to some degree. Visit me sometime. ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
Then you said,
ďIf you think you know,
you donít.
If you think you will,
you wonít.
If you think that sex is love,
Your sex is loveless.Ē


Well said!
Well written!
Thankyou!

Vesna
Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
Great write - very "deep" :0)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Very well written and very much truth here. You should be proud.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Another moving piece of work that was enjoyable to read. G
Reviewed by Minerva Bloom
J. Michael,

A visceral feeling, and so true:
"Iím dying...Iím Dying...IíM DYING...
Iím dying...to live." JMK

I can only say what my mother once told me:
{quoting someone, probably::: We begin to die, as soon as we are born).

It's so amazing and heartbreaking this gift of life and death. Is it not? And so many, the pathways (I always wonder on what is the right or wrong perspective and according to whose perception). Nevertheless, we pathetic humans, keep on trying and longing. Heck...longing is our most precious commodity. Yet what is the purpose of LONGING? Without it, we would be left without awe, at creation/evolution --combined. Lately, I've chosen to believe in both combined. Why not?

Life's strength
is drawn from the same source
as the first light of morning,
the twilight, flower's fire, oceans, mountains, births and dying...

Best regards to you, and fond memories,
keep on writing.

Minerva Bloom~



Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader)
Mike! I love the paradox of: "the broad expanse of precision'. The eloquence of: "The room you think is so big at night shrinks to almost nothing in the day' is so powerful. You do not need to explain what 'she' thought; the hint suffices. So when we reach the line " if you think sex...", we learn nothing more. This line is redundant. Giving us 'her' opinion through hints is more poetic than treating us to her words ( expecially that neither we, nor the world need her, LOL)
Reviewed by Candida Eittreim
Michael, this is so achingly hauntingly hurtful. I truly felt this!

Candy
Reviewed by Birdie Houston
So beautiful!!!!
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
poignant
Reviewed by Lawrance Lux
Death is nothing, but the dying and sorrow is horrid.
lgl
Reviewed by Nellie Feng
Sensitive and Honest.
Reviewed by Letitia Blount (Reader)
WOW!!! I'm lost for words. So beleive me when I say there is alot of of praise in my WOW!
Poe
Reviewed by R Kimberley
Loved this!!
Reviewed by Donna Maris
xcellent words and sharp. Please stop and read my poetry on 9/11. I think I may know you from a chat on stories.com. Does
"I am a New Yorker" ring any bells??- donna
Reviewed by Theresa Koch
This tore at my heart so very sharp the lashing of words can be to ones soul!Brilliant writing`~*
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Edgy write all the way through. You've captured the despair of those who lack interpersonal warmth. Some can't reach out, for what ever reason, and they like the position they hold. ~E
Reviewed by jeanette
people....people who need people...are the lonliest people in the world.
Reviewed by jeanette
So true.
Reviewed by Hanley Harding
I am blown away! Hanley
Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell
a poem that makes me think ... excellent
Reviewed by Victoria Murray
I agree with JC, this poem is intriguing and very poetically expressed. I liked it a lot!
Victoria
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
I love this, very intriguing and the 'ending' is perfect. Janet
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