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Final Bubble's burst
by Marissa M Couchon

Friday, August 16, 2013
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Going through the things we shared

Reading cards and the things you wrote

After all the thing were said I can’t help but wonder

Were they all lies, did you ever really care?

You don’t know what you’ve done to me

You’ve left me floundering again

You broke my heart a final time

I won’t let you do it again

I stood by you through many things

Supported you when you needed it most

Even saved your life a time or two

I’d do it again should the need arise

You used to make me laugh even if I was mad

Now you act like “So now you’re mad.” I’m glad

You sing as if nothing is wrong when our lives are falling part.

Is there really nothing left in your heart

 That you are glad we are done?

What happened to two as One?

 Is it really all gone? Are we really done?

Your answers will decide if this is permanent or not

I thought I’d live out my days with you

Now I see that may not be

A bit of me has died inside

My final bubble burst


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 8/17/2013
Truly a very personal piece written especially for a single reader. I hope it is cathartic for you.

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron 8/16/2013
This poem tells a really sad story. I wish I could be there to hold you and tell you it will be all right, but my experience tells me that right now that's a hollow promise.

I guess whatever doesn't kill us makes us stronger.

Chip Bergeron
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 8/16/2013
Nice poetic query, Marissa...

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