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Lyndsey Nelson

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Some Times
by Lyndsey Nelson

Thursday, July 19, 2007
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A bit of my mind on paper.

When the sun comes up,
I cry.
The light is to bright,
The morning to new,
Life to good,
for its own wickedness

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Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath 8/15/2007
Quite interesting Lindsey, it is nice to put "A bit of my mind on paper". Penning is a wonderful way to just let your inner feelings flow then you can see them and take them to creat a magnificent new and polished creation!

Blessings and welcome to the den~Enjoy!
From the Heart...

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 8/4/2007
Excellent poem thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by . . (Reader) 7/26/2007
I like this poem. Its beautiful, yet sad. But also very true.
Reviewed by William Heffner 7/23/2007
You will never see how much you are blessed if you go through life with your chin in your chest;

A quote from me - The Christian Cop

Thanks for sharing your pain through poetry.

God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

Keep the Faith your best days are ahead of you
Reviewed by Tactfully Naive 7/22/2007


Or as Lennon sang 'Life is what happens to you while we're busy making other plans.'

Intriguing how you attribute wickedness as autonomous to life itself.
Reviewed by Richard Orey 7/22/2007
Life is a journey of experiences. Knowing wickedness is a learning experience. Stay in the light, Lyndsey.

Richard
Reviewed by Mary Coe 7/21/2007
Good write. Loved this. Short and to the point.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 7/20/2007
A short poem but what an ending. Great. Victor
Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre 7/20/2007
This poem is "too" bright & "too" new... both in a good way! Welcome to AD... Where are you? I am a native of Louisiana... with the Jambalaya & Gumbo cookbook bet you would never have guessed... right? :-)~ LOL! Keep on writing Lyndsey!
Reviewed by George Thompson 7/20/2007
This gets one to think. Good write!

George
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/19/2007
Substance for thought and pause, Lyndsey. Thank you. Welcome to AD. Love and peace to you,

Regis
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