|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
|Quite interesting Lindsey, it is nice to put "A bit of my mind on paper". Penning is a wonderful way to just let your inner feelings flow then you can see them and take them to creat a magnificent new and polished creation!
Blessings and welcome to the den~Enjoy!
From the Heart...
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Excellent poem thank you for sharing
|Reviewed by . . (Reader)
|I like this poem. Its beautiful, yet sad. But also very true.|
|Reviewed by William Heffner
|You will never see how much you are blessed if you go through life with your chin in your chest;
A quote from me - The Christian Cop
Thanks for sharing your pain through poetry.
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
Keep the Faith your best days are ahead of you
|Reviewed by Tactfully Naive
Or as Lennon sang 'Life is what happens to you while we're busy making other plans.'
Intriguing how you attribute wickedness as autonomous to life itself.
|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|Life is a journey of experiences. Knowing wickedness is a learning experience. Stay in the light, Lyndsey.
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|Good write. Loved this. Short and to the point.|
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|A short poem but what an ending. Great. Victor|
|Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre
|This poem is "too" bright & "too" new... both in a good way! Welcome to AD... Where are you? I am a native of Louisiana... with the Jambalaya & Gumbo cookbook bet you would never have guessed... right? :-)~ LOL! Keep on writing Lyndsey!|
|Reviewed by George Thompson
|This gets one to think. Good write!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Substance for thought and pause, Lyndsey. Thank you. Welcome to AD. Love and peace to you,