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Watching Me by Derek Castle Sunday, July 29, 2007 Rated "PG" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
I see you standing there Watching me Thinking He could be me I could be him We could be together But were so far apart Lines drawn in the sand That we could never cross I see you standing there Watching me Wondering Could he be the one Can he complete me Make my world The world I knew it would be But your world is not mine And my world is my own I see you standing there Watching me Shouting Trying to get my attention With strong words Persuasive thoughts A flash of a smile And a light touch But I�m gone I see you standing there Watching me Sighing Knowing that all I say is true Two people like us Can never be Its not going to work When all you do is stand there Watching me

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Reviewed by Jennave Coz	7/30/2007

Clever, Complete, I couldn't help myself...For a moment you seem so familiar...Great write.Jen




Reviewed by Karen Palumbo	7/29/2007

Interesting write, so near and yet so far the two shall never meet....... Be safe, Karen