Rhythm Of The Rain
by J Mariah
Wednesday, August 07, 2002
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I can hear the urgent voices
Of the rustling summer leaves,
As they flutter, tossed and battered
By the violent-tempered breeze.
I can feel the gentle tickle
Of the blades of August grass,
As they bow in sheer surrender
While the lovers’ footsteps pass.
I can see the playful quiver
Of the movement on the river,
And I smell the coming rhythm of the rain.
I can hear the forest breathing
In a dry and brittle beat,
As it echoes back the crackle
Of the twigs beneath my feet.
I can feel the sun’s caresses
Underneath the chilling breeze,
As it filters through the branches
Of the towering chestnut trees.
I can see the fading gleam
On the gently flowing stream,
And I feel the coming rhythm of the rain.
I can hear the gurgling water,
As the waves in ardent fashion
Lick the pebbles at the shoreline
With their seething bursts of passion.
And I feel the icy shivers
In the cold and halting way
That the breath upon the water
Carries in the salty spray.
I can see the rippling motion
Of the waves upon the ocean,
As I’m showered by the rhythm of the rain.
copyright (c) JMStevens, 2002 |
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| Reviewed by Victor Jensen |
11/24/2002 |
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| This is truly beautiful poetry with absolutely perfect rhym scheme. definately my favorite. - Vic |
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| Reviewed by Kathleen M. Kohl (author) |
8/7/2002 |
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So very beautiful, Joan.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Chris Stevens |
8/7/2002 |
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very beautiful write!!!!
hugs,
Chris |
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| Reviewed by Tracey Hardie |
8/7/2002 |
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| Outstanding write... love this one!! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
8/7/2002 |
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| Just beautiful, wonderful flow and imagery! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
8/7/2002 |
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Wonderful images... "As the waves in ardent fashion Lick the pebbles at the shoreline." Great lines. Excellent work.
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