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Acid Aches
by Saberi Roy

Saturday, December 15, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.

did I see your eyes, your dust coloured
velvety gaze future born
hidden in blue sultry smoke?
did I taste your lips, the heavy pink
rhyme showing tomato
crevices on earthquake’s mesmerism?
did I touch your hands
your hairy sonata muscles
breathing through salsa moves
of demure toes?
did I kiss your ears
like ridges on a planet lost in the dreams
a bit red with sugary heat….?

my acid aches bit you through
as you sat sequined on my loveclothes

your navel pricked in rainbow colours
my blood stopped in drops
did you feel my heart though
my throbbing moonlight song
beating the winds cracking open
the lids of vesper smokes and ashes
kissing your river veins

it was that glued ribbony love
through a corpsed eye smell of empty skins
or flowers on broken ribs jelly draped.


 

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright - Saberi Roy, December 15, 2007
 
 
 
 
 

 

 


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Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu 2/4/2008
Daring word combinations provoke sharp images. A unique re-discovery of the body.

Axilea
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/22/2007
Yeah but you never left your number as you ran off in the dawn...
Not sure it leaves me wordless, leaves me asking questions i guess....
Reviewed by richard cederberg 12/17/2007
In one lucid moment, shocking and sensuous. Characterized by provocative imagery and ironic juxtapositions laced undeniably with stylized threads of the writers dreamlike visionary capabilities.
Better than Willy Wonkas whole chocolate factory!
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/17/2007
Outstanding poetry. Leaves me quite wordless. Thank you.

Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 12/16/2007
Interesting and the thouhts linger on......

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by John Leko 12/16/2007
...many thoughts...coloured questions...as we travel through your pen.
wonderful...
John
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/16/2007
Yes Saberi you have truly outdid yourself in this enchanting tale of love and desire.

Fee
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 12/15/2007
Saberi, you have struck another taut note of passion and a nest of erotic images in this brilliant write. The melody of emotions resonates through the dancing flames.
Amor
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/15/2007
This evokes memories from the carefree days of the sixties...loved it! Excellent write, Saberi.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 12/15/2007
A hodgepodge of love's delights and carried to the readers consciousness like a strobing 1960s light show, with the heavy bass rhythm of Led Zeppelin taking us to its finish . . . Least-wise that where I was at . . . Good stuff Saberi . . .
Reviewed by Nicky Goodman 12/15/2007
wow -i think this is very powerfully imaged - it certainly leaves clear pictures with me -thanks for the read, enjoyed, Nicky xx
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