|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Thanks for the gift. I'll be using -you make the roses beautiful <---sure fire winner ;)
Fantastic poem, the ugly duckling, perceived, becomes the beautiful swan.
Here lies the making of an immortal fairy tale. xx
|Reviewed by Steve Ralph
|This is brilliant, I really loved it, ( and at some point I may steal your phrase, "You make the roses beautiful" to say to my wife with your permission,).
thank you for sharing this, it is such a lovely thing to read.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
and a very beautiful one at that
thank you Bernice for sharing this wonderful Gem
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Heart warming and heart wrenching. Liz|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|So heart touching and beautifully penned.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|The picture is fantastic,and your poem enhances it beautifully!
I love your fantasy mind;-)ET
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|This is wonderful. I love it. Write the story.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Lovely, indeed as Vickie said, Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder..
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Beauty Is Indeed In The Eyes Of The Beholder
& Even if she was a mag pie-black sheep...your lovely write gave her beauty
Embraced ~ Embrassť
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|The eyes of the heart see only the grace of another precious soul who anoints his/her gaze with beauty, and sheds love and light wherever they are present. Such effect outdoes the bounds of nature itself. Wonderful perspective here which causes the reader to feel a shine from the inside out. TY Bernice. Kate xx|
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|This makes me think of the movie Princess...very nice work, love Holly|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Yes, there you are telling us of yet another Humblebee.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Captivating, romantic, and beautifully written! Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|A wonderful tale expressing the inner beauty in us all, simply delightful....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|For this special someone was looking in her heart where true loves resides. Thank you for this write, it is indeed beautiful Bernice.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|You reveal a whole world of tenderness, beauty, insecurity and pain.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This is truly and honestly a write that should be published for it says so much about beauty and love. That line "You make the roses beautiful" is one of the most romantic and endearing one I have read in a very long time Bernice. Round of applause to you for this one for sure.
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|Watch out world !!! It doesn't get too much better than this.
" Her name is Isobel " " she was the black sheep of the family "
" a tear escaped from her jade blue eyes. " Bernice, you went
into another zone when you wrote this. All I can say about this
one is ~~ two thumbs up ... and the rest of my fingers, so I
might as well give you a high five ... how about two high fives.
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Excellent - most beautiful, indeed.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Good for Isobel. And you too, Bernice. -gene.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|most certainly, a very creative blacksheep poetic story B, highlight, hugs and thanks|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Oh, oh, Oh!!! Maybe she is the Ogress!!! (or me...)
I love it!
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Hi Bernice,a perfect story of prince charming riding on his horse and rescuing his princess who is hurt and thinks she is not worthy it.People need that little extra something to get through the days and to just get by in general.The man you express in that poem,I can see myself in him.You make the roses beautiful,but you make this poem beautiful as well.take care
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...to put the color in roses petals...is to find the color in one who receives them...beautiful.
wonderful write Bernice..
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|What a great story accompanied by a beautiful picture.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|The ugly duckling becomes a beautiful swan . . . Just like in the fairy tale . . . You have a wonderful way of taking on life's oddities and making a silk purse out of a pig's ear . . . bless you . . .|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beauty abounds in your words, Bernice; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|The real beauty is within a person and if you find that you have found a gem.|