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|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|A delight and most heartfelt piece in description of love and life.....
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Sounds like that first important kiss in my life.
Anticipation, slow, tortuous, faltered, readied, faltered, wanting, waiting, wavering, ...
Awesome use of adjectives to create motion.