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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
2/4/2003 |
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| Fantastic write! |
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| Reviewed by Drkman |
12/17/2002 |
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Mike this piece is wonderfully painful.
'I miss the how I could stare into your eyes
And smile so serenely.
And I miss the way you'd smile back
And inadvertently complete me.'
This single passage sums up the while of why you miss her so much. Great Write.
Drkman
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| Reviewed by Timothy Foley |
12/16/2002 |
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| Wow...good work Mike, congrats on the new piece. |
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| Reviewed by Momo Peaches |
12/16/2002 |
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Eh, I don't know what to say. I'll just give you my weird face.
(O.o) |
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| Reviewed by Meghan Lacey |
12/16/2002 |
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| Beautiful and so heartfelt. |
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