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|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Reviewed by Drkman
|Mike this piece is wonderfully painful.
'I miss the how I could stare into your eyes
And smile so serenely.
And I miss the way you'd smile back
And inadvertently complete me.'
This single passage sums up the while of why you miss her so much. Great Write.
|Reviewed by Timothy Foley
|Wow...good work Mike, congrats on the new piece.|
|Reviewed by Momo Peaches
Eh, I don't know what to say. I'll just give you my weird face.
|Reviewed by Meghan Lacey
|Beautiful and so heartfelt.|