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|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|I considered attraction, flirtation, infatuation, romancing and love, but none of those fit.
Yeah, Elizabeth, sounds like good ol' lust to me!
Explicit phrasing, strong verbs, vivid images.
This is a powerful write.
|Reviewed by Everett DeValle
|A lovely read. Pen on. ~Ev|