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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
9/18/2007 |
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I considered attraction, flirtation, infatuation, romancing and love, but none of those fit.
Yeah, Elizabeth, sounds like good ol' lust to me!
Explicit phrasing, strong verbs, vivid images.
This is a powerful write.
Richard
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| Reviewed by Everett DeValle |
9/18/2007 |
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| A lovely read. Pen on. ~Ev |
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