|Reviewed by jude forese
|sparkling perspective of truth, Victoria ...|
|Reviewed by J. Roseline
|Loved this take on the Sunrise very much. Although I too write much on the Sun dance and its great power on mankind but with this my sunrise looks pale, as if it is not too sure if to be or not to be! yours is more forthcoming!with a more powerful vocabulary!!and images too roseline|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Beautiful writing, Victoria. I especially like the imagery you've created in this poem. Excellent personification.|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Beautifully pictured and written.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Duh! Stupid me. It wasn't until I had read the last line about the image that I realized this deity you are talking about in such glowing terms was the morning sun.
As result, you are all the more brilliant.
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|The sun awakens All and your poetry shines on are days!
|Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
|......."There are no moments hindered by darkness".......
and my dear Victoria, there are no truths as lovely as your pen and thy heart.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Beautiful sunrise, Vickie. Something nice to wake up to. What a grand poem this is, and I absolutely love the title, whispering now, Vickieee.
"Rebirthing her presence
among the shadow’s quill"
That is poetry, plain and simple.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Your quill is so light for being a goddess of alchemical scribe and copper smith with assured credibility....wine and bread before consecration turns into a tailored sammy adams and wheat wafers while the twin flame flickers with eternal truth...yours & mine that melded long ago into heartwarming design holistic & liturgically defined 'Creedence of Truth'...