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| Reviewed by Charlie |
4/14/2010 |
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This stanza popped out at me: "Yes
I’ve stitched the wound
but I often touch the scar
mostly from a distance
sometimes not that far"
Deep. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/22/2009 |
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I have been told many times that time heals all wounds; I have not found this to be true. I relate to much of what you've expressed within your verses here, William. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
9/22/2008 |
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This is wonderful because it starts out somewhat negative and dark, then takes an upswing. I especially like these lines, "I’ve stitched the wound but I often touch the scar mostly from a distance sometimes not that far." Those lines say much, especially about the healing process. Well written, William.
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
9/15/2008 |
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This poem conveys the feeling of sadness without bitterness.
It has a soft and lovely flow.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
9/13/2008 |
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I love the gentleness of this piece. I think that sad and painful memories are like that...the wound is healed, but sometimes we touch the scar...and the last stanza says it all and completes the poem perfectly.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
9/13/2008 |
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| Wonderful writing sweet man..have a wonderful and safe day OK...Hugs |
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| Reviewed by Valerie Roeske |
9/13/2008 |
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William,
You've weaved beauty within these words, Great read, Take care Blessing's Valerie |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/12/2008 |
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beautifully written poem of how you found the strength you
needed to get through the years,unafraid to shed some tears...ET |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
9/12/2008 |
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Very nice! Probably most of us could identify with touching the scar. I admire the way you are striving to find complete healing.
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
9/12/2008 |
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Well executed, William! Really cool, the way you brought it from "No" to "Yes" - and there certainly is "freedom in the years" for all of us.
Note: I have just received "Dark Muse" and am already on page 68, and am starting a review as I go. Fascinating and utterly unique read so far. You do nice work my friend :-)
Ted |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
9/12/2008 |
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This is a pretty good poem.The first line of your poem really says it all.I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin |
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