|Reviewed by Charlie
|This stanza popped out at me: "Yes
Iíve stitched the wound
but I often touch the scar
mostly from a distance
sometimes not that far"
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I have been told many times that time heals all wounds; I have not found this to be true. I relate to much of what you've expressed within your verses here, William. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|This is wonderful because it starts out somewhat negative and dark, then takes an upswing. I especially like these lines, "Iíve stitched the wound but I often touch the scar mostly from a distance sometimes not that far." Those lines say much, especially about the healing process. Well written, William.
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|This poem conveys the feeling of sadness without bitterness.
It has a soft and lovely flow.
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|I love the gentleness of this piece. I think that sad and painful memories are like that...the wound is healed, but sometimes we touch the scar...and the last stanza says it all and completes the poem perfectly.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful writing sweet man..have a wonderful and safe day OK...Hugs|
|Reviewed by Valerie Roeske
You've weaved beauty within these words, Great read, Take care Blessing's Valerie
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|beautifully written poem of how you found the strength you
needed to get through the years,unafraid to shed some tears...ET
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Very nice! Probably most of us could identify with touching the scar. I admire the way you are striving to find complete healing.
|Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
|Well executed, William! Really cool, the way you brought it from "No" to "Yes" - and there certainly is "freedom in the years" for all of us.
Note: I have just received "Dark Muse" and am already on page 68, and am starting a review as I go. Fascinating and utterly unique read so far. You do nice work my friend :-)
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is a pretty good poem.The first line of your poem really says it all.I enjoy reading it,take care