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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
1/6/2004 |
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..I adore TREES..and go absoultely nuts when someone cuts one down..I live in a beautiful place where trees and wildlife are in abundance in spite of the fact that it's a tourist resort.( Opatija ..CROATIA)..
Wondeful write..love it! TY
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
9/6/2003 |
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I like this, but it does need some work. Bonita has a point. Since I share you
"rage" against the destroyers of nature and the environment, I would like to see
you succeed with your writing. "Reincarnation as a tree" is so great. I love that line.
(Of course we may not be thinking of exactly the same people). Anyway, it's obvious
that your heart is in the right (and the write) place. |
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| Reviewed by meljess |
8/4/2003 |
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great title i thought it was about death
but its good anyway
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
6/30/2003 |
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| Well written in conveying your intent, Kyle. Since you are working on your first book, you might want to read "Writers' Seven Deadly Sins" pointing out why rejection slips are prolific and contracts hard to come by. You will find a copy of it amidst my AD webpages. |
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| Reviewed by Kelie Urbanec |
5/15/2003 |
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Kyle,
Real emotions expressed very nicely done.
Great Write.
~Kelie~ |
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| Reviewed by Mark Carroll |
4/13/2003 |
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Hey kyle,
It is great to see you are still at it.
Are you able to update from sea?
I offer to make updates for you if you can't.
Of course you may want to dump your download when you return.
Either way, Nice piece
Rage the oil well fire which can only be qwelled by the key stroke.
I salute you, friend.
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
3/26/2003 |
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| Behind you on that idea. Great write. ~Trish~ |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/26/2003 |
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| The emotion and wisdom flowing through this write is fantastic. Great write. |
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| Reviewed by Renee Bagley |
2/17/2003 |
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Wow, this is fabulous and I love the symbolism!!!!
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| Reviewed by Aamie Burnley |
12/29/2002 |
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| ... "be the better man" is a phylosophy i have tried to instill in my sons; thanks for showing me that it is being applied in one life. i like this very much! |
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| Reviewed by Aamie Burnley |
7/27/2002 |
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| Great piece. Especially since 9/11. |
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| Reviewed by Mark Carroll |
7/25/2002 |
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YO K,
I dig it, er, love your planting.
Peace,
Mark |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
7/19/2002 |
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| Thanks for this I enjoyed it very much...I agree.. the world has sooo much beauty it's a shame to see that lost...Dani |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
7/19/2002 |
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It must be awfully hard to be in the Military. God Bless. Other than that you are a FANTABULOUS writer.
Keep Penning,
Janet xoxoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/25/2002 |
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| creatively executed... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/24/2002 |
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| excellent write... |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/24/2002 |
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| Very creative work...very imaginative. Loved it. |
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