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I Fell Down
by Aidan J Spurrill

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I fell down
It's nothing
Just a bruise.
It'll Heal.
There's nothing to talk about.
I'm fine.
It was just an accident
Like before.
But this time I fell farther.
He's a good man
He works hard for us
All day.
I wish he didn't drinks so much.
He only gets angry at me when he's drunk.
It's nor his fault.
He's a good man.
We're lucky he came to live with us.
Otherwise, we wouldn't get any money.
Yes, he gets angry at me
A lot.
But he'd never hit me
Not intentionally.
It's not his fault
It's mine.
It wasn't him
It was an accident
I fell down

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Reviewed by Charlotte Spurrill
the way you get inside the mind of the abused woman is amazing. this is a terriffic write, Bro.
Reviewed by isoar4jc
Absolutely Excellent, but scary at the same time
Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione
you are a way better writer than your sister is. I like this one a lot -- check out the homicide story I wrote in this genre.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
What a powerful write...don't make excuses, get away! (((HUGS))) to you, Aidan. Love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by jude forese
time to stand up! enough "accidents"
Reviewed by Lori Moore
You captured reality here.

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