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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
6/27/2004 |
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| Exquisite piece ~* |
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| Reviewed by mz kimi |
1/23/2004 |
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| bravo mister romance! |
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| Reviewed by sexwhitelace |
3/29/2003 |
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| i would love for u to do that to me paul and its a good write |
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| Reviewed by mkg305 |
3/28/2003 |
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| very sweet and also nice to know that a man can be sensetive and very caring |
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| Reviewed by Calendula Petal |
10/8/2002 |
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oh...a man that can undo a bra....such a talent..
a most beautiful write. |
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| Reviewed by Calendula Petal |
10/7/2002 |
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| mmm, sweet and spicy |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/7/2002 |
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| as always, excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
10/7/2002 |
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| Wonderful romance here. Well Paul, do you have to undo the bra everytime? Oh, that's a fun part? |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/7/2002 |
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Great feelings and imagery!!!!! Very romantic indeed!!!!!
May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)
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