by Cynthia Hepner
Tuesday, January 08, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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He showed me a love that can never be replaced
He showed me a love that will never be forgotten
He brought to life the passion in my heart
He showed me the beauty of his words
He showed me how to laugh,
and to feel true joy
He is in my heart and soul
He is a part of me
He will never leave
He is kindness,
He is Life
He is love
He is me
We are one....
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|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Excellent piece, Cynthia|
|Reviewed by Frances Seymour
|Great Job! Blessings...Frances|
|Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Writing about your "He" is like writing about the "He" in my life.
God brings into our life people who are extensions of His love, and
this poem tells us that true love is God's gift.
|Reviewed by Ken Chartrand
|Hi Cynthia, I read your poem,"He Is..." I found it full of passionate insight. Something else I noticed is the total shape of the work ,when looked at as a whole was the shape of a vanity mirror (Like the ones with long handles). Or the shape of becoming one.So, not only the words but their placement on the page was significant.
Keep up the good work. Please feel free to visit my site here in the"Den"
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Glas you know such love, many do not. True love cannot be spoken of enough. It lasts and bring enjoyment to each other. You seem to have found it, may you have it forever.|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Those of us who are blessed to have a "He" appreciate the joy that he brings of our lives.
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|HE is all things beautiful and miraculous, nicely prosed....