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Just Like Us
by David TheTeach

Friday, March 08, 2002

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I was in a hurry
or in one of my moods
My hands were full

trying to put the dirty
dishes in the sink
My favorite wine glass

the delicate hand
carved crystal one
from our trip to Waterford

I knew I should not
place it there
but I did

bumping my hand
against it and still
having time to catch it

but wondering still
if the fall would break it

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Reviewed by James Samdavid1 3/27/2002
I had read this before on another sight, but truly enjoyed reading it again. Good job Bro.
Reviewed by Alain Gracio 3/9/2002
Unclutter your mind, and fill it with emptiness. Know the center and hold
Life is a balancing act,
best of wishes
your friend
Reviewed by John S 3/9/2002
Nine times outta ten it falls and breaks into a thousand pieces but maybe this is the tenth time.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/9/2002
he broke it, she never forgave him, they were never the same after that...nice scenario isn't it? over a piece of which the world, should say "get a life" but it doesn't .
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley 3/8/2002
... and relationships should never be jeapordized for the sake of curiosity; shame on you!
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley 3/8/2002
... still i see the crystal suspended in mid-air. i hopt it was saved, by you, or by the grace of god. nicely told, david!
Reviewed by anne cunningham 3/8/2002
i remember this one from wbyme ... and am struck, once again by the precarious nature of the object on the brink in direct relationship to emotions of the same sort ... and the "what if" if it fell, would it break scenario ... so often we wonder this.
Reviewed by J John (Reader) 3/8/2002
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Reviewed by Helen Companion (Reader) 3/8/2002
I would clear up some of the filters and maybe put this in a very short poem with a few subtle word choices that hint towards something deeper. But other than that, it's quite excellent.
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