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You Want Me
by Kate Clifford
Saturday, February 16, 2008
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Okay the Dam has opened. No telling what will be written next LOL. The photo that I am showing with this freelance poem is titled Silence. A word of nothing that tells everything.



You want me donít you? I can tell.
I have been your prize once before.
My wings are spreading; my life is full.
Through your eyes I see me again.
So many years of pain, of loss,
Tears fell. you didnít care.
Our last words ugly to the ears.


Iím unattainable, this is why you want me.
Oh the ride we would be on if I said yes.
The traveling, the laughing, the experiences.
Always ending with a hug or a kiss.
My eyes are no longer innocent to your ways.
Your smile and laughter was joy to my heart.
A heart you broke when you looked the other way.


Our last words ugly to the ears.
Tears fell. You didnít care.
So many years of pain, of loss,
Through your eyes I see me again.
My wings are spreading; my life is full.
I have been your prize once before.
You want me donít you? I can tell.



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Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Deep moving sad yet ending with hope and strength.
Hugs from
Kay
Reviewed by CJ Heck
Wow, Kate, I can't believe how this touches me. You reached inside and found an experience I had, one I thought I had buried. I couldn't have expressed it as well as you have here. Excellent writing.
Hugs,
CJ
Reviewed by Paul Judges
Good work, Kate
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Indeed, avoid toxic relationships by all available means!
Well scripted, Kate.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Wow one can hear the anguise in this, the power, the passion, excellent, Holly
Reviewed by Jackson Aniefiok
Perfect words well selected to form a passion poem!, I think he wants you and i agree with you after listerning to those perfect words.
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Strong write. R
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Wish you would post a new write. Are you ill? It is so nice reading your writings. You at least know we want you on the den. Please come out like the eagle on your bio and fly free and set yourself free and write on more beautiful thoughts. It can be, but prayers go out for thee.
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Tell it, Kate, TELL it. H i m !! What a voice! What courage and
insight! Add my second to Ameria Van Kerk's Wow. All the other kudos
being heaped!! May great fortune shine on you and yours. Always, and
Then, 'Pea'
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
Wow. What an excellent, touching write.
All the best to you
Amira
Reviewed by P. Michaels
Hi Kate, there is much sadness in this poem. Hope times will get better. I almost lost my loved one, but in a different way. However, when a loved goes away or might go away, we feel like a part of us is dying or might die, too. All we can do is pray and keep on hoping.

Best wishes,
Pat

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
To accept what once was and will never be again or wanting something after it has been lost can cause pain. Thank you for sharing Kate.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by E. Richardson
wow...this is very good...a beautiful example of a person coming to grips with hard realizations, but also recognizing the importance of personal freedom. Outstanding work, here Kate.
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
oh sweet relish of having gained or regained your freedom...wonderful, Kate!

gina
Reviewed by John Leko
...words once gone...about face...return.
very well penned...
John
Reviewed by Barbara Terry
To want is not necessarily to have, Kate. I agree with Jeanette, that you have touched on all the feelings and emotions she described. Thank you for sharing, Kate, this is a very insightful piece, and gives women all over the world, hope to be able to tell that one creep where to go.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Love, differences, anger, separation, sadness, loneliness, denial, MAYBE NEXT TIME... You've touched on all of these, which can be a cycle toward a second destructive relationship.

Well penned.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Excellent write, Katydid, and I LOVE the picture! Very well penned and illustrated; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
A bitter sweet cycle sometimes. Those who only want what is out of their reach. Good write. Lady J
Reviewed by Art Sun
One can read the emotional ride of which there is left a questioning of another the idea that they still wish to be a part of a relationship griped with a bit of agony and frustration...

nice work, Kate...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
like a bad addiction, those past relationships get inside your cells...just say no. :) well done piece, emotions/sensations most readers can relate to
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
I do, but think Rene would be quite jealous...e
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Beautiful write - keen desire - powerfully imaged in verse. Well done, Kate.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Glad you're back -
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Ah, this reminds me of the Phil Collins song about the woman in the red dress . . . Destroyed love sometimes has a way of coming back to bit the hell out out you . . . And what better way than to make him desire you again . . .
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
So sad ...remembering the pain. It's hard to fathom that pain scars so deep.
Blessings and love,
Susan
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