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spring meditation
by anne cunningham
Saturday, June 14, 2008
Not rated by the Author.
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spring meditation
mourning doves
and morning glories
from the bottom up
feeding, reseeding
fight for flight
the bird twice shy,
ground-swallowing
the flower,
determined to climb
and I?
the moody
brooding woo --
--oo-oo-oo'ing
fades as
wings whistle,
revitalized
by the tincture,
one brave flower
with mood renewed
finds eye.
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
11/1/2009 |
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| kenny nailed it! Admirable!! xOx 'Pea' xOx |
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| Reviewed by kenny baez |
12/30/2008 |
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| Lovely sounds and the spirit of China's flowers and birds delicately captured. |
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| Reviewed by Ken Chartrand |
8/2/2008 |
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| Hi Anne, I read your poem,"spring meditation". I found it arrives at a crescendo when Spring finally arrives. Enjoyed this very much. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den". |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
7/10/2008 |
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Wonderful enjoyed thank you for sharing.
~Gwendolyn |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/15/2008 |
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To me, your verses evoke symbolism and much meaning, Anne. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/14/2008 |
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Interesting images that strike out with the power of nature and life.
Well done Anne.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
6/14/2008 |
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This is written as if you were watching it happen!
Your words are read as if I were there, watching!
Truly, a poem for Spring and life in the happening!
I DO like this one. - Bill
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/14/2008 |
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| Love to watch the mourning doves on the telephone wires around my place and also like morning glory vines. My aunt had them out from her back porch. I have none now, but like them anyway. Wonderful write. |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
6/14/2008 |
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| Absolutely lovely writing about two of my favorite things. Wonderful! |
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