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|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|I surely wood/would!|
|Reviewed by Lark Pogue
|Creative thinking at its best. Hope there are still some rivers flowing in my drought-stricken area, because I am ready to go and dip the toes.
|Reviewed by J. Roseline
|living on the edge, there is great strength to seek the water of life
nice thoughts kate , well done
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I would but with my luck the river would be polluted and my roots would wither up and die...(ah, for pessimism, as without it we wouldn't have optimism...)e|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I sure would. Probably go whole hog and skinny dip as well.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Yes, I would too. Creative poetry, Kate. Enjoyed!
Love and blessings,
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|yes i would
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
beautifully composed Kate
I would quench my thirst by the river
pray under the shade of an oak
thanking God for giving me the substance of life
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|If I were living on the edge...I would span out and embrace the life giving cool waters of that river so that every leaf would swell with the deepest green and allow my branches to sway in the gentle breeze. Excellent work, Kate|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Great poetry that stirs the intellect to ponder the greater meaning of life.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Very nicely done, and you bet I'd dip my roots into the river. Yes!|