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I read the poem "Etching Memories" by C.Dennis-Woosely and this came to me.
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A wise heart keeps sweet memories,
A fools heart lives them everyday.
Dreams are but tomorrows hopes,
In lifes footsteps slip away.
Lifes direction is predestined,yet,
Our course in life we lay.
Dreams can change with passing time,
With conclusions just a trade.
Hold close that which a smile can bring,
And forget mistakes we've made.
True love is everlasting,
Even when a heart's betrayed.
Seek the light of happiness,
It's all for which we've prayed.
©Copyright 2013 by Ed J
All rights reserved
03/08/2013
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/9/2013 |
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“[As] life's footsteps slip away.” It's such a wonderful line, like most of the poem that is filled with so much wisdom and insight for such a brief discourse.
You have real talent and others here are noticing it as well as I.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) |
3/9/2013 |
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This is interesting you make mention of the other author. A conclusion can be made from this wonderful expressive poem you are filled with frustration. A conclusion of dreams lost with this author or someone else in your life.
Heartfelt wonderful poem excellent expression.
Di |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
3/9/2013 |
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We adjust our dreams with the time that passes by but may they always be beautiful.
Sweet dreams and beautiful memories are the fruit of a loving soul.
A beautiful poem Ed
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| Reviewed by Gail D (Reader) |
3/8/2013 |
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I believe dreams change if you can't fulfill the dreams you want. Disappointments can do that. Seeking the light of happiness is the best thing to do. Prayer is the best thing you can do as well.
Gail |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
3/8/2013 |
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The wise heart always keeps sweet memories...
and aye dreams can change daily....
conclusions at best are one-sided and only
to the person who forms them...
Life is a mystery upon all of us...
Excellent poetry...
Love and Light
Lily
(thank you for the recognition that I inspired this - but you spelled my last name wrong) |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
3/8/2013 |
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so very true wonderful words excellently written
budd |
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