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|Reviewed by William DeVault
|Pain is proof of life, unfortunately. Be strong and write your way through it.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Shelia, when you think on this...always remember, it's better he walked out before you had children & a home...then the pain steals every ounce of your day and night. Be happy you have today, tomorrow, and a possibility of a "new" love that will be even greater. I know its hard & the suffering you are feeling is difficult but you are better off without him because if he wasn't in for the commitment it would have never worked anyway.|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|I'm so sorry about what you had to endure.Love can be a beautiful thing but at the same time it can break us up in so many ways.Nonetheless,a beautiful and expressive poem.Take good care of yourself and stay strong :-)
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'When will this pain end?'
YOUR PAIN WILL GONE ONE DAY, NOTHING IS FOREVER IN THIS WORLD, NO LOVE, NO PAIN!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|In time, in time the pain will ease and you will find that life does relentlessly go forward, as it should....
Be always safe,