by Maria Sebella
Tuesday, February 12, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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turn the leaves to brown again.
Cold winds blowing,
frost covered windows block the cold.
Firelight burns in the hearth below,
warm bodies snuggle in its glow.
Winter has come once again,
but love will stay us through to the end.
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|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Love the flow in this piece and the rhyme although I tripped on the last line with its extra syllable...I am sure it will still work. The message it sends is beautifully intimate and expression is full of passion.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Great poem... Yet not to be a pain...but love will stay "until" the end.
But Michelle is a master poet. I'm just her erm. thingy, student...
I'm a tight minimalist to get max in less being more....
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Enduring love seems to get us all past just about anything, wisely written.....
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|This is nice, short and sweet. I love winter, so this is right up my alley!! I was wondering though if the last two lines might keep the beat better as "Winter's come once again, but love will stay us through the end." Just a suggestion :) Blessings, Michelle|