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My Mother's Eyes
by Ahna C

Monday, March 24, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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For my Mother, Cryssa C.

My greatest features are my eyes

For you see…

I have my Mother’s eyes

And for that I am deeply honored


My Mother’s eyes are faithful,

They’re blue like the ocean,

As constant as the waves of the sea

Majestic like the horizon at dawn


My Mothers eyes are full of charity

They nurture,

They teach,


My Mother’s eyes have unconditional love,

They know no hate,

They are stronger than any controlling bonds of anger or jealousy,

They are full of compassion…


My Mother’s eyes cry

They grieve with loved ones

And weep at others sorrows


When her eyes cry,

Her soul cries too,

For children without a home,

For people who can’t see the truth,

For those struggling down a path leading to darkness


When her eyes cry

So do mine…


My Mother’s eyes laugh

They sparkle like stars in the night

Leading lost ones to safety,

Through the perilous storms of life

Helping them find the light,


My Mother’s eyes are compassionate,

They yearn to wipe away the forgotten tear,

To soothe the pain of an aching heart

And console a suffering child


My Mother’s eyes comfort

They uplift

They encourage


My Mother’s eyes heal

They erase all traces of hurt,

They soften hearts

They wipe away anguish and pain


My Mother’s eyes are full of bliss,

When they look into the eyes of my Father,

They light up with a flame of undying passion

A light which is reflected in my Father’s


Their love can’t be hidden,

It is too strong for that

It is eternal

It will NEVER die


My Mothers eyes are beautiful gems,

They shine like Crystals

They glow from her love within

Never hiding it from the world


My Mothers eyes beam

When she finds the word,

For the perfect line,

To another flawless poem


My mother’s eyes have confidence in me,

They reassure me when I’m uncertain

They support my decisions

They don’t force hers


I know I can do anything

Because every time I look in my mother’s eyes

They say “I Love you!”




………I just wanted to say Thank You and “I Love You Too!!”


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Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 11/11/2008
A precious tender loving write, blessings, Holly
Reviewed by Axilea MU 5/15/2008
Your mother's eyes must have been shining with tears of joy when she read this poem.
Transmission and love give us great strength!

Reviewed by Michelle Mead 3/28/2008
Wow, what a wonderful dedication this poem is. I can really appreciate this as it reminds me alot of my relationship with my mom. Really beautiful.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/25/2008
Awwwwwwww...doesn't get much better than this. Well done, Ahna!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/25/2008
Beautiful tribute to your mom, Ahna; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 3/25/2008
So beautiful, your mother has beautiful eyes indeed!
Reviewed by Paul Berube 3/25/2008

A beautiful tribute to your mom and it also says so much about you. There's a special world of love in all eyes involved. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 3/25/2008
Like the culmination of a love song on an aria fading on a high C. both.

Reviewed by Cryssa C 3/24/2008
This was a surprise to see in my inbox today... I am a little speechless. You made me cry...
Thank you, my sweet Ahna... daughter of my heart, our firstborn. You would make any mother proud, but I am so very grateful and proud to be able to call you mine.

I must disagree with your aunt though...I love your eyes because they are the color of Grandma's, my mom. My eyes have too much gray in them, but hers...and yours... are blue like the summer sky. When I look in your eyes I see my mother and your actions shine like hers did...compassionate, gracious, generous and loving. Thank you for letting her shine through your eyes.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 3/24/2008
You are a daughter any mother would be proud of. A most adoring tribute to your mom stemming from the love in your heart....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 3/24/2008
Your Mom will be so proud of this poem. This is a beautiful tribute to Cryssa. Mothers are treasures in this world, indeed.

Best wishes,
Reviewed by Charlie 3/24/2008
Your mother's eyes are my favorite eyes too. They are the eyes of my mother. And so it goes... Love ya. --Your favorite aunt (named...)
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/24/2008
This is a gem of a gift. It reminds me of my own mother. She chose to leave this life early. You express a truth and a deeply respectful love. Thank you for sharing this gift, Ahna. Love and best wishes to you,


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