|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|This is excellent writing... I pray you are not purging because you will tear your intestinal tract to shreds eventually... anywho you didn't write to hear me preach. You drew me into the poem and kept me reading.
|Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
|Let God purge your soul and rebirth your spirit, breaking the chains that so easily enslave us..........Deborah:)|
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|a stark and poignant write...and a damn good write. One of the marks of a good piece of poetry is a layering of possible interpetation...you have done that splendidly in this piece. As easily as it can be read about an eating disorder, it can also be read as an abuse of a different kind. This is good work. Welcome to the den.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|An interesting piece of what many face and try to keep hidden....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A very moving write that touches the soul of the reader, Kimburlie. Thank you. Love, peace, and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Please say this is fictional - society has much to do with people feeling bad about themselves. One can never be too thin/rich/famous enough; why can't we learn to accept us for whom we are? Maybe others will, too. That is my hope. Pain, excellently penned -
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.