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Committed to Abuse
by Kimburlie Benincasa

Wednesday, April 16, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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I turn to lock the door,
My knees hit the floor.
I look inside this porcelain bowl
As I force my body to lose control.
On my knees I feel so empty,
Again the guilt takes over me.

Rarely am I in this desperate situation,
But there's to much sin to fix with starvation.
I look at these four walls,
As I hear a voice call
I stumble to hide my affairs.
My visions blurred with threatening tears.

This relationship I've committed to is abusive,
Yet I'm addicted to it and keep it exclusive.
There's always an easier way
To keep the shame at bay,
To give my family and friends satisfaction,
Keeping them blind to the chain reaction

 

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Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz 4/21/2008
This is excellent writing... I pray you are not purging because you will tear your intestinal tract to shreds eventually... anywho you didn't write to hear me preach. You drew me into the poem and kept me reading.

***Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) 4/20/2008
Let God purge your soul and rebirth your spirit, breaking the chains that so easily enslave us..........Deborah:)
Reviewed by E. Richardson 4/16/2008
a stark and poignant write...and a damn good write. One of the marks of a good piece of poetry is a layering of possible interpetation...you have done that splendidly in this piece. As easily as it can be read about an eating disorder, it can also be read as an abuse of a different kind. This is good work. Welcome to the den.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 4/16/2008
An interesting piece of what many face and try to keep hidden....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/16/2008
A very moving write that touches the soul of the reader, Kimburlie. Thank you. Love, peace, and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/16/2008
Please say this is fictional - society has much to do with people feeling bad about themselves. One can never be too thin/rich/famous enough; why can't we learn to accept us for whom we are? Maybe others will, too. That is my hope. Pain, excellently penned -

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.



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