|Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
|Excellent write Jon! Reminds me of similar idea I had for a poem - but never got it out well. I did write it but it later found place in trash. Hehe. Excellent write my dear..!|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Beautifully written...Is'nt it wonderful to know Jesus is there to steady us when we need Him. Praise be to His name!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reads well. Nice breaks of meter here and there. Good one. Enjoyed it. ~E|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Wonderful poem, of course! And, I also like the ending!
I wrote a poem somewhat similar called "Walkin' on Water" --but I like yours better!!
|Reviewed by Tracey L. Hardie
|Awesome write!!!!!! Great ending!!!|