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Can you sit and talk with me? by: LInda Law
by Linda Law

Friday, October 10, 2008
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There is life after death; but it comes in stages...there is happiness and peace, and love is special too...if blessed enough to find it. Grief however is ongoing, no matter what they say...and when you lose a love it's hard enough; but when you lose a friend as well...the pain goes even further... I'm blessed with a good new love; but I still miss my friend!
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CAN YOU SIT AND TALK WITH ME?  by: Linda Law

These last few days have been filled with such emotion
Remembering how once our lives were filled with such devotion
And no matter what I do, my mind still connects with you
Yesterday the ache was strong, just chalked it up to being blue
The roads I walk are filled with holes and darkness
When in the best of times, I'm blessed beyond the starkness
The weight upon my chest seems heavy and takes my breath
Yet I know, it's nothing more than what I feel is emptiness
How can I say that I am happy, and I do believe that I am...
And I know you understand.. I miss your love, and need to be loved again..
Just as you told me times before, without you...I can

Some days I look around in search of you in the hopes
that you can sit and talk with me... Just sit and talk with me...
You always listened, you always knew... even in the silence
Oh what a friend ... the very best friend...you always were to me
In the morning when I wake, I sometimes hear your little tune
Sometimes your scent; your presence seems to fill the room
Those days of knowing you had it all covered, knowing I didn't
You'd be surprised I think, to see how much I have hidden,
The world sees me strong and bright, and inside it is empty
What would you say if you could stay just for awhile
Would you understand, give me advice, or simply smile

Does this mean that life will always be one to keep me guilty
When I know you're gone, you're safe with God, I am happy
  So, I don't mean that I am ungrateful, simply that I miss you
Our yesterdays are sealed and mine forever not to share
Today is fresh, and I've withstood the tests, yet there is always
emptiness... If you could just sit and talk with me...

Would you be sad or disappointed in how our lives have changed
It seems as if we placed too much upon your heart with burdens
Then it took awhile before I could begin to plan for tomorrow
You wouldn't even know me now, I cook, I drive, I'm not so afraid
No longer am I Ms.Daisy, as I take the wheel from state to state
You'd be amazed how fast I clear truckers off the highways
Our kids are grown, the grandbabies are now having babies
I searched the web for a man, if otherwomen could, I knew I can
Who would have thought an oldie like me would get another look
Yet, here I am...starting life again... just wrote my first, second and third books, yes my love.. I did it!

I don't know why, as each month comes along, even though it could be October... That was our time
then I remember that December was our time, the way we spent so much for the holidays, then it was February, and you were my Valentine..so I showered you with gifts and candy....you loved the getting
then the end of February was my time... and you did all the giving
Can't forget how April was the springtime and you'd take me on long drives...while July was the kids time, with lots of food and happy
So, I guess, each month seemed to be our time, while we were together.. but now the sad times seem to come with the weather..

This is the only way that I can say what is heavy on my heart
how I miss you still, and wish you could just sit and talk with me

 

 

 

 




 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 



 


 

 


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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 10/18/2011
Beautifully done Linda. This is a soft and wonderful work
hug
kathy
Reviewed by Linda Law 3/29/2009
thank you for reviewing this piece... we have to sometimes sit and talk ourselves into understanding that we do miss our loved ones...and that is only normal...natural... if we do that...and then move on....it is so helpful... altho of course..the real person would be much more satisfying... :-) law
Reviewed by John Domino 11/9/2008
LOVE is above ALL things.

You wrote a beautiful LOVE poem.

GOD bless you for your spiritual blessings.

John Michael
Reviewed by Cryssa C 11/5/2008
This breathes nostalgia and yellowed newspaper clippings...but all mingled with little purple violets...don't know why... hee, hee... It is beautifully written and I felt your words. I sometimes feel the same way about certain friends in my life who I have lost touch with...wondering if they ever think of me...

Cryssa
Reviewed by Jerry Engler 10/21/2008
You are the fragrance in a breeze, the vision in a sunrise, the touch of a child, whatever to you, you know he's there because you only know you know. Your writing is therapy for yourself as well as for others. It is better to remember your love than to try to bring it to conclusion as though it never happened...Jerry
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/16/2008
A loving and touching remembrance, Lindaw. Love and blessings to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Denise Edwards 10/14/2008
very inspiring, Linda. Loss is a painful part of life, but God gives us the strength to go, and love the memories we are left with.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 10/13/2008
Beautiful Morning To You Linda
I Send My Embrace of Comfort To You Den Sister
Loss Is A Grave Hole Within Our Hearts, and never to be filled by the vacancy of the owner of that space it does seem....
Much Love & Memories Cherished
Peace, Love & Happiness
Embraced ~ Embrassť
Vickie
Reviewed by Judith Pleasant 10/13/2008
I see you wrote this poem on 10/10/08 10/10 is the anniversary of my mother's death. 42 years it has been and I still miss her physical presence- but her spiritual presence is always with me. An older friend of mine died last Friday 10/10. I will be writing about her soon.

Linda,
Very touching.
I am so sorry that your LOVE is not with you anymore in the physical- but he surely is in the spiritual. I can feel his presence in your poetry as I am sure you can also. I am glad you have so many happy memories of him. Some people don't have those kind of sweet memories. So you are blessed. Keep writing with your heart as your LOVE guides your hand.
Blessings,
Judith
Reviewed by Shedding Light 10/12/2008
I know the feeling of missing a friend. This piece
is so expressive that it is touching.

Harold M. Nash
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 10/11/2008
Linda he is there and hears every word you are saying dear, He is also telling you to live your new life and accept the love that is being offered you as you have but one life to live and he wants you to be happy. He was a precious part of your life and our memories are ours forever and I know you will forever be thankful for them. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Bonnie May 10/11/2008
He will always be there to love and inspire these great writes. And the great thing is, you can tell in all about the wonderful life you continued with as he watches on. It is so obvious that he still is there with you and always will be but he wants you to live and love and find the happiness until you meet again. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/11/2008
An insightful poem and how that wonderful man left his mark on your heart that you can't erase nor want to. Many can relate to this tribute to a lost love who is now in heaven smiling on you.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/10/2008
He is there sitting and talking to you, you are hearing his words you just cannot see him or touch him.
Hugs
Fee
Reviewed by 000 000 10/10/2008
LInda, I forwarded this to 3Hawks--but signed my name.
CarolHawks
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce 10/10/2008
Linda:

What a wonderful tribute to your loved one!!! Losing someone who is a lifelong companion is like losing an arm. I can feel your pain in this one. I'm glad there is a new one who loves you, as you are well-deserved to be loved.

This poem displays great longings and wonderful endearing sentiments. Great job, Linda!!!

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/10/2008
Poignantly, powerfully penned, Linda, I'm sorry for your loss, still keenly felt: I know. I know - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/10/2008
Sadness felt in your pen; you're so right: grief never goes completely away. I still miss my mom, and it's been over 18 1/2 years since she died. And I'm missin' my daddy; he died in May. So this Christmas will not be very merry as we remember our father and think of our mom.

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
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