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| Reviewed by Michael Jones |
8/13/2008 |
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| After reading your poem it is quite possible my 25 year marriage was experiencing what your break up did. What I have learned since then is that love can't truly exist without committment. A very profound and interesting piece of poetry, well writen. |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
6/10/2008 |
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Understandable and well written, enjoyed the read although sad.
For the most part it did not overtake with sadness instead relief.
These breakup are sometimes a part of life and sometimes they are also warranted!
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Dee C. |
5/4/2008 |
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So sad and touching...the heart aches.
Much hugz,
Dee |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
2/14/2008 |
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Boy, this sounds like me when we separated and then divorced so many years ago. The nothingness was bigger than all outdoors, and so was the peace. Glad a found a husband who fits the bill about what love is and enriches my life.
God bless you. Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
1/12/2008 |
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I have enjoyed the reading of a wise artistic and beautiful composition... "A Love Ended, I'm Not Broken-Hearted" is a masterpiece.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/4/2007 |
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| a difficult situation .... very emotionally moving poetry, Sherry ... you should write more ... |
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| Reviewed by Arthur Tugman |
6/24/2006 |
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Sherry, I enjoyed your poetry. You inspired me to write:
Nothing is good
When everything is bad
Anything will be better
Than some things I've had. |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
5/1/2006 |
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Like that last line Sis Sherry. A friend of mine, widowed and in her early 50s, who actually happened to be named who just got jilted by a three year romance. Let's say he would have been a good candidate for surveillance on that show called "Cheaters."
Now her only concern is being checked for a disease that we pray to God she doesn't have. Wouldn't it be nice if life were as calm as the scene in your photograph above?
blessin's, lovely poem, lovely peace to you,
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
3/20/2006 |
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| This is strong and sure. This has wisdom of not looking back but movng on. Well done! |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
3/19/2006 |
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| So very sad, but the photo is one of peaceful tranquility. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
5/2/2005 |
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| Fantastic write!!! |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Borris |
4/27/2005 |
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Sherry,
A powerful statement that love does not have to leave one brokenhearted. Excellent poem and written extremely well. Great job!
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/15/2005 |
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| Graphic image and verses complement one another to achieve a powerful expression of hope for the future. Thank you, Sherry. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
3/15/2005 |
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Sherry,
The vibes here on the 'Den' have been strong lately ... amazing; a beautiful pic and equally stunning write!!
Best to you,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
3/15/2005 |
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| Love is always waiting around the corner. All one needs to do is walk in that direction. Great pen |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
3/14/2005 |
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Dear Sherry,
I thought it wrong to feel the way you so articulately penned this, but on reading it a couple of times, I realise that I too would feel happier, "to rather live my life alone
Than to exist once love is gone." What good is it merely existing ?A superb write Sherry, it really hits home.
Stunning picture.
warm hugs
Elga |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/14/2005 |
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| AAmen to that! Telling it like it is probably hurt the guy more than all that screaming and sniveling, least I know it would me. LOL |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/14/2005 |
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Sherry,
Had one of those "I don't know why it came to me moments, have to write it down before I forget it" moments, eh? Strongly emotional, energetic, ain't NOBODY gonna mess with me type of write--ENJOYED!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
3/14/2005 |
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strong, and confident
well done
pax A |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/14/2005 |
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Superb poem! I agree with your last lines. If you feel
nothing then it has been over for a long time.The photo is incredible!
etw |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/14/2005 |
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so sad, you are in my prayers, sweetie! all the best to you; powerfully sad poem! i feel your pain in every word!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
3/14/2005 |
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| This sounds like what my pastor friend said when her husband of forty one years left her for a new honey. |
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