|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Nice poem...you give the view from one looking into the other's turn of event....the change of thought into black and it's effect...
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Very well done,enjoyed very much sweet lady...be well and always safe..Hugs|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|So few lines imbedded with so much thought. Enjoyed greatly|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Olivia, so much said in seven lines, intense and dynamic...from the brilliant opener to the more gentle, almost nostalgic last line.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Almost a foreboding of what is to come, well said.....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|A very good poem,Take care Olivia,I enjoy reading it
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|i too like this...it speeds on, spiraling|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
|Exellent poem. Love can be rough.
|Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
|i like it|