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Fade to Black
by Olivia Lalla
Wednesday, September 24, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Fade to Black

Lit up like a dagger,
I drove so fast.
My heart palpatating,
like a thief in the night.
Spiraling out of control,
thoughts zig zagged in and out of my mind
That night I saw you fade to black.

Olivia Sarre Lalla

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Reviewed by Art Sun 9/25/2008
Nice poem...you give the view from one looking into the other's turn of event....the change of thought into black and it's effect...

nice ...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 9/25/2008
Very well done,enjoyed very much sweet lady...be well and always safe..Hugs
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 9/25/2008
So few lines imbedded with so much thought. Enjoyed greatly
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/24/2008
Olivia, so much said in seven lines, intense and dynamic...from the brilliant opener to the more gentle, almost nostalgic last line.
John
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 9/24/2008
Almost a foreboding of what is to come, well said.....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 9/24/2008
A very good poem,Take care Olivia,I enjoy reading it

Edwin
Reviewed by Sue Hess 9/24/2008
i too like this...it speeds on, spiraling
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 9/24/2008
Exellent poem. Love can be rough.

Mary
Reviewed by Darryn Murphy 9/24/2008
i like it



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