|Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni
|This reminds me of a Johnny Cash tune, somehow. I can feel you kicking up the loose dirt on the path you're walking.
"the crimes we commited against each others hearts
all the while shouting out the word love
as if it were an excuse for all wrongs"
This is the fatal mistake most couples--most individuals, for that matter--take for love and never consciously realize what they're doing.
And so you've moved on....
|Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
|i was completely captivated by this piece, its sad and beautiful and everything poetry should be... tks|
|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
|Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it... Very heartfelt...|
|Reviewed by donner
|for 13 months I was alive in both the darkest days and the brightest nights.
Others could not have shared this as we did.
your words are the path to nirvana
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Enjoyed reading it.