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|Reviewed by Richard Bowers
|Which way shall I take the course to my reader’s hearts,
What scale and tools do I collect with,
What voyeur’s wrap I claim in readiness.
Are the ages of my father come to bear,
Or will be for next generation’s benefit:
And for sure hope luck to smile a lot,
Unless I weaken in devotion,
That I harbor this pretext,
Where course is subject to a wanton age.
Gather, flock with us; examine all to beyond:
Valiant person have surpassed our time.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Enjoyed Poses very much, the imagery is great! You take the reader there allowing them to experience it for themselves! Well done!
|Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
|impressive piece, draws to a striking end perfectly.|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|This is very good.|
|Reviewed by Jim Smith
|I like the verbal sketch. I have the picture clearly. Is this literal or dreamy? In any event, I wonder about the symbolism of the two set off lines...|