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A dieing wish!
by Qamar A Abbasi

Sunday, March 02, 2003

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I am, breathing my last, near the point of death
I will be gone soon as
My eyes are closing
And my body is struggling.
I see a beam of light appearing before me
Calling me to its origin.
I hear people crying in the background
Praying for my well-being.
As the clock keeps ticking
I breathe my last.
I see my body lying dead in the bed
As I depart from it. I see people around it
Crying and mourning.
Leaving this dilemma behind, I keep flying
High enough desperately looking for my mother.

Mother, welcome me to your heaven.

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Reviewed by Buddy Angel 4/19/2003
What a very moving write.
Reviewed by Shezray Faisal 4/11/2003
Very sad, and beautiful and haunting...
~Shezz
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 3/21/2003
Nice flow and very visional
Reviewed by LEZBO 3/17/2003
Lulllllllu that was sooooo sweet. if u were here right now i would give you ah big huggy. and may you ami jaan get the best in the here-after inshallah
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 3/12/2003
poignant
Reviewed by Seema 3/4/2003
It is interesting to notice that all of your poems represent your feelings and love for your mother. This is a great tribute to any mother. Your love for your mother is outstanding. Well done.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/3/2003
qamar, this is outstanding! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) to you, qamar! :)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/3/2003
Qamar,
This is excellent.
Peg
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) 3/2/2003
Sometimes we must have faith. Excellent.
Reviewed by jude forese 3/2/2003
you project into a land few wander... well done!
Reviewed by Fahad 3/2/2003
doggy thats hot as shit, but i didnt love u i would say ur GAY!!, ahahah, joking. Its off the hook nigga...
Reviewed by Saima 3/2/2003
Woh qamar! This is deep...sad... wow i dunno what to say...I hope things just get easier for you...Inshallah everything will be fine
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