November Twenty Two
by shell L call
Wednesday, December 24, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A mere glance, can take you away from a lonely place
Wondering why are we stuck here dwelling somberly asleep
I wish you were beside me and counting for the next day to come
As our dream of paradise will bring us to a perfect one
Idleness can take the best of us
For what and for why our sadness is drowning us
But we continue our lives as if nothing has come down
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|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|I really enjoyed the form and your subtlety all tied up in a small package with the blood of longing pumping within it.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Passionately flowing with such underlying beauty...
Be always safe,