|Reviewed by John Domino
|What is this invisible feeling called love? Why does it drive us mad when it's not mutual and causes us to crave more of this invisible feeling? I talked to a good friend who just celebrated her birthday. She said all I wanted for my birthday was a big hug. She got many hugs after our church service was over. So her love comes from Godly people because her man has up and gone. Amen my friend.|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|So beautifully poignant....
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|This is the abject pain lovers often encounter and to endure is one of life's greatest agonies. For social mores we punish ourselves unmercifully. It is so easy and uncomfortable to relate to your words Regis. May peace and love be always with you. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Pain, such pain of unrequited love. However, we never know what the future holds.|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Wistful thoughts alone will never bring her home. Perhaps it's time to pick up the phone and try to re-connect. A sad, sweet song.
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|maybe it's not as impossible as you think. you must tell her at the right moment!|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|I patient is soooooo hard to do!|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|This is beautiful, and felt in the heart.
|Reviewed by Kenny Baez
|Oh, the ache of love .... toothache is less painful than longing for an old love... best wishes, kenny|
|Reviewed by Jena Ayro
You have drawn the picture of
the dawning of time, a time
when she was thine
Her voice, scent, kiss you do
miss, that leaves you longing,
empty, so lonely you mind does
Her deepest thoughts must be
of you, for you are stirring
the universe with all you feel
for her as you woo
Nice.. Thanks for the read..
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|Very touching and meaningful. An honest and vulnerable voice courageous enough to be authentic.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
|very touching and beautiful sweet man...Hugss|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|But... patience never rewarded still doesn't take away the love.
And... one-sided love never works.
I've recently become more patient - but the past had shown me to be impatient quite a lot. So, you're right - it's a combination of "love" AND "patience." Of course, sometimes one-sided love is all there is. Should you wait, in hopes that it might change? Or move on? If you know that she loves you for certain... then wait; but, if you know it's over, move on. -- Jeff
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|This poem indicates there some secret reason why you, "can't." So my best advice is to stop worrying about it and move on. Like they say in the Pacific Northwest, "there's a lot more salmon in that river."
|Reviewed by Michael Schafer
|Very touching and heartfelt.
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|When you least expect it, true love will come along and knock your socks off!
|Reviewed by Michael Kieser
|I wish I had the words to relieve the turmoil
& dispel the myths that bind you??
But I have never been in your shoes!
So I can only relate in theory(?)
But you capture the essence of Loss in the poem!
- - To strive after - But not have anymore!
- To live in memories - Without any contact.....?
Bravo on a job well done!! - - - - - MDK
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Sometimes we have to completely release our heart and let go of someone before we can ever have a chance at love, again. If you are holding on to someone else and hoping it will, once again, become the love affair you once believed it to be, you will never have a place in your world for the next true love who is waiting to be with you.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I wish I could ease your pain
Hoping that would make u feel well again
But think that between two guys maybe that would considered profane...
Glad to see you back, my friend, had been worried of late...-e-
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|How wonderful....patience is all one lives on with memories good and strong :)
Lovely poem...thanks for sharing...
|Reviewed by lois christensen
|Another great loving poem for her wherever she may be, and this gets the message across very well how you feel about love.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Love. A wonderful experience, until it becomes a hurting thing. Been there. Done that.|