|Reviewed by JimmyHolder ShyPoet1
|Wisdom, and vision, in poetry is one of my favorite things.
Well-said and i like your fluid style.
I'll be back - to read more.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
"Look ahead and forge your plan" - a great and truthful line ... a most wonderful poem!
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|The final stanza is the best, by far.|
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|I like the poem and the message therein!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|well done! your message is clear ...|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was wonderful and so wise! excellent!
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|great poem. vivid images and some really strong lines.|
|Reviewed by E Detetcheverrie
|The last two lines really kick ass!
"...a life long dream that has no plan
is a trip not taken, a waste of man."
You rock, man!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Push all distractions off your plate
set new terms to concentrate
a life long dream that has no plan
is a trip not taken, a waste of man.
This is excellent for Belles Challenge."
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Optimism? Positive Attitude? Excellent response to the challenge, Michael. Thank you.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Sounds like self confidence/determination in my opinion, excellent way to put it forth, Mike, Peace, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Franz Kessler
|Good write- one can go a long way with a good plan - for a worthy goal. Franz|
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|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Determination? Optimism? Great poem, enjoyed, Michael.|