color my world tormented (la belle's challenge, part two)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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no one pays attention to the things i say.
they say writing helps. then why do i feel pain?
dreams are wishes that don't come true anyway.
i've seen my dreams shattered again and again.
there are no miracles with my name on them.
God isn't listening to me anyway.
i feel useless, lonely, abused and condemned.
no one needs me to darken their life today.
(The emotion is depression.)
(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
A great write,
Keep it up...
|Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp
|That was a great dresciption of the first few minute of my day. Ha Ha-- great write.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Depression, Karla, I wouldnt know anything about that, yeah sure right, what the hell are most of my writes about then, LOL! Wow, another winner, just like the last challenge one you wrote...Peace thru NO Pain, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I have been to this dark space in the mind. Very unpleasant. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
This is a very powerful and well done poem; you have captured the sheer helplessness one feels when they are depressed. The sadness and despair come through very strongly in this poem; you make the reader feel your pain! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(